tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9275366.post6942501875277960516..comments2023-05-09T15:51:11.405+05:30Comments on Mimosa: The Switchpaul vhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06635798426954643311noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9275366.post-50949236132130856332012-02-03T19:23:05.202+05:302012-02-03T19:23:05.202+05:30Wow! Nice concept. Nice ending too. May be also ad...Wow! Nice concept. Nice ending too. May be also add a little more in between the story. Feels a disconnection in between. The transition you have chosen to twist the story is nice and may be you add a slow subtle ness to it.<br /><br />BTW who is your soul mate... Hmmm?<br /><br />Also add couple of more characters and names, like the bartenders name, brunette's name, police man etc...<br /><br />Liked it.Nainahttp://holymouna.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com